Larx - black and white

Haha, the things she says (and would carry out) are awesome. This looks good over all, but I am really bored at the moment and you said if I were, then make suggestions on what to fix. Since this is a light study, I will ignore anatomical things and focus on light (shadows). For the most part, it seems the primary light source is somewhere above and slightly in front of here, about where the red blob for the dA Muro button is at the top of my page, and there is a secondary source coming from behind and just above her shoulder level, most likely reflection from the primary off the wall she is leaning against, so I will go with that. For me to be able to gather that much, your shadows would obviously be very good as they are. However, there are a few small details that could be adjusted. The shadow projected from her head would extend a little further down her neck on her right and make the area around her ear much darker. Her nose would be brighter on the ridge and gradually darken as it comes down to the cheek area and begin to bright again a at the high points of her cheeks, with the tip of the nose being the brightest highlight. There would be a slight shadow under her lips that would help them stand out more. It is difficult to tell what is going on with her arms, but it appears the darker shadow is under her right forearm and hardly any under her left, but I think it would be more appropriate reversed. A little more shadow is needed inside the ear. A slight shadow on the back side of her shoulder coming down to meet that on her arm would help place her against the wall, and darkening that light area at the bottom edge of her butt would help place her on the floor. Overall, everything else looks great.